The good and bad side
of using facebook
I.
Thesis
statement :
Facebook is a social network, and it is used by some people around the world.
Indonesia is the 3th country after USA and England for the most face book user.
It has some good and bad side that many people should consider.
II.
Topic
sentence :
there are good sides of using facebook.
A. Main
supporting detail :
communication media and entertainment.
1. Supporting
detail : chatting
2. Supporting
detail : having communication
with old friend with some facility served.
3. Supporting
detail : sharing pictures,
experiences.
B. Main
supporting detail : facebook
for business.
1. Supporting
detail : facebook as
promotion media.
2. Supporting
detail : connect with buyers
and other business man.
C. Main
supporting detail : facebook is used for invitation of
an event and meeting
1. Supporting
detail : by create a forum,
some people can share an event and invite other people to join.
2. Supporting detail : some people use facebook for
meeting and use it for discussion about their planing the next destination or
about an event.
Concluding sentence: they are some good sides of facebook for
people. It can help their job and it main function is to communicate with other
people around the world.
III.
Topic
sentence : there are some bad sides of using facebook.
A. Main
supporting sentence : some people
use facebook for deception.
Supporting
detail : shally case.
B. Main
supporting sentence : kidnapping.
Supporting
sentence : some case of
students who kidnapped by new friend by flirt via facebook.
Concluding sentence : Many bad sides are appearing when
using facebook especially for the unwise people. Many crime facts are happen
and many people should consider of it.
Concluding sentence : the use of facebook is depends on the
users. It can be useful if it used for
the positive purpose such as business, studies, and entertainment and it can be
useless if it used without any responsibilities.
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